I'm gonna start off by saying I think this looks awesome and your style is amazing!
It's hard for me to find anything to critique but there's one thing I did notice and that was the perspective of her right leg (Our left) feels a little off. It looks like it's further in front than her left leg when her body and pose should put it further behind. It's kind of like her right leg is trying to steal the show when her left leg should be the star.
That's the only thing I could find and when looking at your other works I couldn't find the same thing repeated.